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Twang...vibrated the electric guitar string. The musician sang an old time rock and roll song Rock around the clock gonna rock gonna rock around the clock tonight he tapped his foot. "crack"! fractured the toffee ass I champed into the bright red sticky toffee apple. IT shattered into little glass-like pieces in my hand. I licked the sweetness from my fingers. I became sticky around my chin as I ate the delicious toffee apple. I told mum "I like coming to the market because the sticky toffee apples are awesome to eat. "mum said I d love some but my false teeth might come out in the toffee. "I thought poor thing can't enjoy the toffee apple.

"Ho Ho Ho !" shouted the lucky dip vendor "lucky dips for boys and girls ! only $ 2 a dip. "I took my money from my wallet and handed it to the cheerful old chap his big hand closed around the $ 2 coin and I dived in trying to sense what might be in each parcel. I took one and ripped the paper away. an I-pad was mine.

Bang! the roman candle blew up in my hands. it sparkled and brunt my hands. It smelt like gun powder.